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Doc's inventions
by Alex Relloso
Just finished 1st year in animation
around 3 weeks, part time
An astonished fan sees the last creation of his idol
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CodyValjalo
The character design for both characters was really great. The animation was very smooth and expressed each characters personalty well. The jump arch for the smaller character seemed a bit off. It seemed to go up, the back, then up again. Perhaps it was a more fluid arch, it would have flowed much better. But overall great work. I love seeing the 2D entries.
San Mathew
Great play on scale
Divyam Chand
framing should have been tight...theres so much of negative space. but nice animation
Alaa Aldeen Alhamwi
nice needs more inbetweens
Gabriel
Big one has no weight...
Rob Small
Good poses! And I like the characters! Just could do with a few more in betweens...
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool poses but a bit erratic. Big guy's weight way off near the end. Bring camera much tighter.
Terressa
This is a decent start. Staging feels too far away, bring the view on closer to the characters. The big guy's animations are really solid and the take looks great. It would be nice to see instead of a dead hold, a little big of action on both characters parts, even a finger twirl, weight shift, something minor that still brings life to the characters.
Marta
Nice!
Angel R
Congratulations!!
Tuyyo
Awesome!!!
Tyson Haeh
We're too far away from the characters