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Jetpack Gone Bad!
Couple of months of experience in character animation.
It took approx 2 weeks, every evening 2-3 hours.
Hello everyone! This is my first try on 11secondclub, and actually 2nd animation I have ever made.
This animation is entirely made in Maya 2015 and rendered in Mental Ray.
Thank you! :)
Comments
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Divyam Chand
the leaning pose is out of balanced....exaggeration required where sound hits.
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool concept, bring camera in tighter.
Bodies too stiff, use hips and spine more.
Michael Kristiansen
Not bad. I would enhance the secondary animations. They are kinda stiff when not doing stuff. Also be carefull of the body movements. Maybe try the scene out yourself to see how your limbs move in relation to each other.
Joel Murphy
You had some great poses, and some great acting, but the staging could be better. A lot that's good about this piece is getting lost due to how far away the characters are from the camera.