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Nuclear Oven
by Patrick Wise
Marty was looking forward to having a home cooked meal! That is, until....
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Rob Meech
this Morpheus 2.0? he looks terrible and freakish
AJ
needs more of a reaction and he backs away too early
Danny Kneip
The lip sync needs much more polishing, but the scooting away from the oven (or whatever it is) is pretty good. Additionally, cutting to "Doc" would have helped because the shot, overall, is simply not that interesting to the audience - keeping him in that same exact pose for 10+ seconds - nor is his reaction very believable.
Ian Alexander Hanson
Like the idea of opening up.
Body is floaty, use fast and slow variance. Use hips to direct the body. Watch erratic knees, etc.
Terressa
Like the concept, the facial expressions and the staging. The energy of the character matches well with the dialogue. The scoot back could use more work, the timing could be sped up a bit during the initial push back along with the spacing of his landing. Also watch for the knee pop at the end.
Tyson Haeh
Acting is pretty good but could use more weight, face can be pushed much more so it's readable