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Hey...! Careful!
Description
In a world where everything works on gasoline... well almost everything!
Comments
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Christoph Lendenfeld
the gesture on "kick" is a bit early and the lip sync is too soft. It needs to have longer emphasis on the mouth shapes
Ian Alexander Hanson
Like the staging in general, though could pan camera right some.
Movements erratic and not sure of focus. Watch weight and posing in the walk.
Nicolás Rafael Suazo Monsalve
The camera angle is waay back, should be nearer the characters. The character walking from the left to the right is unnecesary, should be there already. The poses needs to be more apealing, the spacing is too even.