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Robot
This is my first animation shot for 11 second club, and second for my personal works. hope you guys don't like it so plz give your helpful critiques so next time I can stand make my best.
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Lea
Some nice gestures in here, the double thumbs-up looks especially good. The rest is rather floaty unfortunately and the hips feel very stuck in space. Involve the whole body and not just the arms.
Ed Seager
I like, put some over lap on the arms they are hitting the presses too hard
Ian Alexander Hanson
Some good ideas; like how he's looking into the boxes.
No need to gesture for both sucker and nuclear - choose one or the other and make that the big thing.
Need better twist in the spine, better overlap.
Nathan Younger
have a lot of twinning.
Terressa
Great staging, body language. The energy of the character matches the dialog and the take is appropriate.The lip sync could be exaggerated a little more to be read more easily and the arms could use more overlapping action and arcing movements.