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Nuclear grills
Description
a man talking about a grills that use plutonium to make roast meat.
Comments
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Ian Alexander Hanson
Good ending.
Seems unsure of what to do with himself, spine not involved in the action enough.
Michael Kristiansen
Watch the curves when you spline after your main poses. His right hand for example, takes the position of the next pose way before it is relevant - hence his hand will look floaty and out of place.