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Heavy Duty Cell
by Sarah
Matt is buying a new cellphone. He knows next to nothing about them and is discussing the merits of a particularly heavy duty phone with the salesman, Sam. After the contract has been signed, Sam’s not responsible for any radiation poisoning.
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Christoph Lendenfeld
you clearly ran out of time which is a pity because I like the idea and the animation is good aswell. However I don't like that he runs away at the end. It doesn't really fit with the voice I think. I mean you could make him run but first let him finish talking
Danny Kneip
For what it is, it's okay. Obviously it needs completion and major polishing. You have a good foundation.
Rotimi Emmanuel Olowu
the character in the t-pose should be animated, it is kind of awkward
Kamal Bhattacharjee
what the FFFFFF!!!!
Ian Alexander Hanson
Would like to see finished!
Like the running out idea.
Watch spine and hips work.