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11 Second September
by Eric Murray
Lets have some fun
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William Barry Eggington
Your Doc shoving the fuel into the robot was well done. Good job.
Julien Ferritto
wtf
Danny Kneip
Slightly over the top in the acting, yes? :D Some continuity issues (F157 and F158 are not a match, nor are F248 and F249). These are noticeable problems. You might also pay much more attention to shifting weight on one foot or the other when the character takes a step. Overall, this is good, and there's a strong foundation here, but still lacking a few fundamentals.
Ian Alexander Hanson
Good facials. Body movements erratic and bodies not fully connected to themselves. Use fast and slow movement for emphasis.
Terressa
Love the story. The actions of both characters feels a bit stiff and unnatural. Try going for more organic poses, more C curves. The timing on pose shifts need improvement as well. The eye movements are working well however there needs to be more than just up and down jaw movements for dialogue, try for more natural mouth shapes to emphasize the words.