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Boring person?
by Kyle Phan
Shes whining about her boring person
Comments
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Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein
A lot of action; some of it is confusing.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
Who's talking?
Sabrina Winkel
What in the planet earth of tremendous mortal humans did I just watch?!
Chris Clarke
The fighting is cool, but I'm not sure who is talking.
Shakya Achyut
Lol Good idea... But think about it, if disney/Pixar gives you this dialogue to animate, wont be good idea to present it to them.
elreydelbarrio
It doesn't make any sense with the audio
predrag lazic
The two ladies being different people took a bit to register. Not bad though.
Byron Pockrandt
Nice action, needs some work on the timing, a little too fast with the kick and throw. A little too slow with the transition between attacks. The two guys should stand in a more natural pose. The last girl's lip sync is ok, could use some clean up. I would like to see the main girl lips move.
John Sloan
Characters moth really cant be seen, and the full body motion is incredibly robotic.