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Hopeful
by Bridgette
Mid-life crisis with a job switch
Comments
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Bridget McCleary
change frame rate
Marcus Taylor
It seems to me very pose to pose. I'd work on your timings, and working within a few good poses. That should also help the floaty feeling.
Gaucelm De Villaret
I like the stopmotion effect.
Shakya Achyut
needs moving holds...too much smoothness ...everything on auto or spline after blocking?
Edward.J.Gonzalez
fps needs to be fixed, lots of unecesary movement and lack of voicesync
Byron Pockrandt
The lip sync was ok. But the characters movements were not defined. They were wobbling all over the place. Add some breakdowns. Make sure to use your graph editor to give life to your animation curves.
John Sloan
Animation seems to be laggy or the frame rate was incorrectly submitted.