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Bathroom Gossip
by Leah Green
My 2D animation, which depicts two spy girls talking about spy life troubles in a night club bathroom.
Software used: TVPaint
Comments
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Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein
I like the character design of the first speaker. Maybe add a little more fluid movement.
Sabrina Winkel
She moves her arms to much
Hanne Dewachter
Try to remember that movements aren't just restricted to the limbs themselves, all movement goes through shoulders, back, hips,.. your character look quite stiff because their movement is so localised.
Byron Pockrandt
The second character's mouth should move and be synced like the first character. There should also be more breakdowns between the poses and arm movements.