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A Sad Story

by Amonti Johnson

Final Rating: 3.55. Finished #69 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Amonti Johnson

Experience

4 years of college

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Two spyies who are actually working desk jobs fixing the equipment that the main spies of the organization use.

Comments

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Hanne Dewachter

Your movements can be a little all over the place, like your models don't really understand their own body yet. (try animating the fingers a little more)
Good on you for making that background though!

Byron Pockrandt

Awesome machine in the background. But the animation could use some work. The girl on the left never pauses her hands to give the clear definitive pose. Add some holding points. I can't see the girl's eyes on the right. Get some better lighting or textures to fix that.