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My first try.
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Sabrina Winkel
The fox in the background is random and a distraction, the picture on the cup magically disappears
Elizabeth
super cute!
Hanne Dewachter
Heheh, I love the fly.
Rachid Jatib
cool beans fly at the end made me smile, maybe add a little bit of movement on the bg and work a little on the lip sync.
Byron Pockrandt
Pretty awesome. I know the first character is an iguana but the eyes are sometimes in sync and sometimes not, so I'm not entirely sure which one you are going for. Also the fly's hand motions seem to be just a faster repeat of the frames 180-210. You should add a little more diversity to the motion. On a side note, the bunny picture disappears at 265. But good job overall.
John Sloan
Great idea, love the camera angles, needs work. The character animation just needs to be pushed further. I would worry less about color and more about action. Overall great job!