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Exciting
by Diane Aarts
Description
here`s my VERY rough tradigital flash animation, enjoy!
Comments
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Sujit K
need more work
Hanne Dewachter
Nice! Your movements look great and your characters very animated! I'd like to see this in a more polished state. Your lipsync could be a little more on point though, try not to animate every single letter, it will look more natural.
Byron Pockrandt
For a line art animation this was really well done. I'd like to see the pink girl move a little while the blue girl talks. And vice versa. A little clean up and some filler color and this would be a great piece.