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Two Grils

by Jason Lu

Final Rating: 5.21. Finished #28 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Jason Lu

Experience

1.5 years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

The gril talk to her friend about he sadness.(Frist time to join 11second club,Just hope to get advice about improve my animation.thanks a lot！

Comments

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Byron Pockrandt

I love the hair animation. The animation curves overall are pretty smooth. I'm not so much a fan of the pose at frame 120. It just feels awkward. Also, towards the end at frame 270, she seems to have a lazy eye. Her eye's are looking two different directions. Other than that, great job. I also love the attention to detail with furniture and props, especially with the textures on the bottles. Nice set up/