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spy
by May Kirabo
Deep in thoughts, does not realize she is speaking out loud. a bit high, so on hearing someone replying to her thoughts. she gets a shock of her life.
Comments
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Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein
The lip sync is pretty good. Some animation in the rest of the body (besides the face) would help a lot. Also, the mouth action at the end feels a little unnatural.
Sabrina Winkel
Lip syn is off. She needs to move more and I saw her mouth drop before the 2nd character audio ended
Hanne Dewachter
.. woooow, that last facial movement creeped me the heck out. Brr.
Byron Pockrandt
Great background. But the animation needs a lot of work. The facial expressions need breakdowns. The mouth needs to be more natural and not like a nut-cracker. Add some asymmetry to the mouth shapes. The last two poses need some breakdowns and clean up.