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Confidentially Speaking

by Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein

Final Rating: 2.83. Finished #86 out of 96 entries.

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Experience

5-6 months

Time Taken

H560ard to say, maybe 15-20 hours

Description

A woman believes her call is private.

Comments

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Sujit K

very static

Sabrina Winkel

Camera movement is bad and the character just magically appears

Hanne Dewachter

The models look pretty, but your animation is very.. doll-like. Kinda stiff and lifeless. Try putting more movement in the shoulders and back of the characters, have them twist around a little.

Byron Pockrandt

Great render. But the animation needs some work. Both characters feel very stiff with the movement ability of a barbie doll. Loosen them up. Use the shoulders and head tilts. Have them lean side to side. Give them more life.