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my dear friend
by Frank Pak
Description
my first upload here, I'm studying animation so please give me feedback
enjoy :)
Comments
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Sabrina Winkel
She jerks her head a lot. Try making her sit still. But I loved her face at the end
Elizabeth
Needs more breakdowns and stronger poses but I love the animations you did with the ghost. It was very unexpected and very funny!
Byron Pockrandt
Points for creative originality. The overall movement could be timed a little better. The lip sync needs some work as well.