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Small Dress and a Big Gun
by Joe Cooper
Description
A women undercover as a waitress grabs her gun to do a hit while lamenting her lack of action in the field.
Comments
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Bridget McCleary
Too much camera movement
Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein
I really like this design and concept. A lttle jerky; what's happening around frame 194 is a little confusing.
Frank Pak
I think you use too many camera movements
Byron Pockrandt
You have some confusing camera angles. Keep the camera relatively still and the shot changes down to a minimum. Also the main character with the big head moves around very sporadically at 184 and 270. Tone down the movements and try to keep it more subtle.