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You don't speak French?
by hui
First time entering a competiton!
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Louis M.F.
Movements are a bit stiff when they enter their beginning/end poses, but they're looking super fluid while they're moving, and your gestures have a lot of character. Love the pointing pose when she says "Problem". Experiment with follow-through and try having the characters "relax" into a pose when they reach it instead of standing stock still, that should loosen up the movement a bit. Your lip-sync is awesome though, no problems there. I see a lot of potential
Richard Adams
Waitress is overly floaty. See Youtube about dealing with floatiness in your animations.
David Nori
The movement dies at almost every time they get to their final pose.





