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Revolution

by Sanjeevani

Final Rating: 4.57. Finished #58 out of 117 entries.

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Animator

Sanjeevani

Experience

very little

Time Taken

three weeks

Description

Revolution

using Bonnie Rig from GumRoad
using Guillotine asset from TurboSquid

Comments

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Phongsakorn Khamchaisu

I think you should use a single camera that shows all the characters in the scene.

Richard Adams

The animation is good, the idea...rather repellent.

Loubna Khider

The guillotine is not around her neck it feals really weird (I know it I am french) and it would have had a lot if we saw the blade falling down but otherwise good job

David Nori

Interesting at start with the guillotine but feels completely unmotivated at the end. Why is it there? How does it contribute to the plot?