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Small meeting
by Nastia
A little story about a small meeting of two loners
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Joshua
The walk cycle felt a little clunky, and while it's obvious that the Cat is the one talking, I would have liked to see her mouth move to help further the emotion your trying to get the Cat to express. And the guy's shrug at around frame 319 comes across more as dismissive than sympathetic. And the guy's mouth movements (it's hard to tell cause the video itself is small, not to mention so much negative space is being used to show the background rather than help focus on the guys face to help show his thoughts and expressions) but his lip movements feel, a little out of sync and under polished.
Julian Dill
I'd love if we could get a slightly better angle of the cat's face, and the guy feels like he's moving a little quicker than i'd expect.
Rabah Cheurfa
Awesome!!!!
David
Love that you're acting through the cat. The cat ears turning back after "love" is a nice touch!