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Joshua Farmer
The final animation seemed a little "crazy" looks like a good concept.
Timothy Muller
Hello. My main advice is towards the teacher's dance at the end. It appears the his hands become stuck onto the table and he simple bungees from pose to pose. I think he also moves a bit too fast; it's a bit confusing to follow and doesn't make sense how he could speak that clearly at that speed.
Overall, I enjoyed watching this. Keep up the good work.
Aldric
Really nice fast movements from mr buttons, maby a smear between 343 and 344 when he jumps could make it more fljid because theres a big jump difference between those two poses. Also try to add more facial expressions towards the end. Another thing i noticed was the hands when he is sitting down look too much IK its ok to move them a little even if they are grabing the chair
Lewis van der Werf
Obviously still in blocking so hard to give feedback, but some nice dynamic poses already. I liked the breakdancing bit. When the boy is panting you could position him better so that the chair is not infront of him.
Emily
I like the movements and the emotion on both characters. I'm not a big fan of the teacher having his back to the camera, maybe have the camera closer and do a three quarter shot. The dance at the end was entertaining, but it would be stronger with a little more settle at the end. Good job.
Eric Raffle
movements are way too fast, cant see anything at the end
Niladri Shekhar Saha
From where did u get this cat rig :)





