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Strange Encounter
by Ralph
That moment when you forget you signed up for something.
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Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty
so funny, is the boy eating something when talking?
Angela Colvin
Way too many cuts. This should be more about animation of the character, not the camera. With only 11-15 seconds of animation, you might want to limit the amount of cuts you make to only one or two... it's way too much for the eye to handle and it isn't necessary. Your camera moves are more prominent than your animation. Focus on you character animation.
Dylan Zhang
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Kendra Kaye Coffey
calm down on the camera effects and focus on the fundamentals such as lip syncing.
Timothy Muller
Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Isaiah
Your camera movement is way too quick. It makes it very difficult to see the animation. You never want to hide something you've put a lot of time and heart into. You should show it off. It's okay to have quick action but the camera movements make it very hard to read.
Also, you need to hold that leg and arm, looks like they are floating to the next pose in the next cut or something. Your poses are a lot of fun though.
Your lip sync could use some better articulation.
Eric Raffle
lacks animation fundamentals
Tianyu Chen
what the ..