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Don't Touch Me!!
Description
last FP under Ray's teaching/guidance :c
did it for about a week worth of hours
Comments
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David S. Rodriguez
It is funny, but I am unsure if adding "SPLAT" adds anything as the impact looks better without it. Still, everything works and the lip sync is solid. I like the dyanmic between these two and congrats on a great animation.
Richard Clark
Wow! Those 2d effects!! Pushing the cartooning aspect, however, your characters lack weight to them for most of your piece and they look robotic with their motions. Did you shoot reference for this? Lip sync could improve. It looks a bit off.
Shura
Can you make them hold hands.