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Better Not To Try
by Alex Nguyen
Description
The girl's confidence in France left the waitress stunned.
Comments
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Louis M.F.
The individual key frames are pretty good, but there's just too many of them and they switch between each other a bit too quickly, the cashier moves well but it kinda looks like the girl in blue is having a medical emergency. Have a go at starting with the first and last poses of each shot, and building them out from the middle to keep the poses in line with each other and flowing smoothly.